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10 RULES
FOR WRITING YOUR HOME PAGE
By Susan Greene
Because the home page is the first page most
of your visitors will see, it’s also the most important
page. Its purpose is to grab the readers’ attention and help them
find information quickly and easily. If your home page lacks
facts or is confusing, your visitors will click off before
they ever gets a chance to know you. Here are some tips for
ensuring your home page is effective:
1. Keep it concise.
Today’s web surfer has a short attention span. The home
page needs to cut to the chase or risk losing the reader. Don’t
waste a lot of time giving details and background.
Tell the visitor what your website is all about right off
the top. Make it concise and focused. A good size is 200 to
250 words. That should give you enough space to tout your biggest
benefits and also encompass those all-important keywords. Save
lengthy, detailed copy for inner pages.
2. Use keywords.
Search engines use keywords to determine where to place you
in their directories. Make sure you write your home page
to include the words you most associate with your business
and, more importantly, that your prospects likely associate
with your business. You need words, the right words. That’s
why flash sites and graphics-only sites do not perform as
well on search engines as sites with keyword-rich copy.
Take some time to brainstorm what keyword phrases best describe
your offerings. Don't know what search queries might be used
to reach your site? Go to www.wordtracker.com where you can
actually test your keywords and get suggestions for related
terms. Also, do keyword research through various search engines.
Get feedback from customers, suppliers,
sales people and friends. And don’t forget to check your competitors’ websites.
How do they describe their products or services? Now determine
what will work best for you.
3. Write copy from the reader’s
viewpoint.
First you must know your reader. What is most likely to interest
him? Visitors are looking for the answer to the question, “What’s
in it for me?” They don’t want to read company
profiles or lengthy corporate histories. They may want to
learn more later, but first they want to know that you’re
offering something that they want.
Here’s a quick test you can do to see if your copy is
reader-oriented. Count how many times you use the terms “I” and “we.” Next
count how many times you use the terms “you” and “your.” If
the “I’s” and “we’s” outnumber
the “you’s” and “yours,” you’re
likely to lose your reader.
4. Provide specifics, focusing on benefits, not features.
Rather than giving broad generalizations about features such
as, “Our machine is fast,” it’s better
to make strong, specific benefit statements like, “Our
machine will increase your productivity by as much as 25%.”
5. Simplify navigation.
Your visitors should be able to instantly determine where to
click on your site to locate the information they want. Hyperlinks
should be easy to find. Use good descriptive phrases for labeling
buttons.
6. Personalize your approach.
More people will buy from you when they feel you are talking
directly to them about their individual needs. Make your
copy friendly and conversational. Despite what you were taught
in Freshmen English, it’s okay to write in second person.
As mentioned earlier, sprinkling the words “you” and “your” throughout
your copy will personalize your approach.
7. Use headlines and subheads.
Big blocks of copy turn readers off. Use catchy headlines and
informative subheads to break up long-winded paragraphs and
guide the reader. It’s a good idea to use keywords
in your headlines and subheads whenever possible as their
prominence can help boost your position on search engines.
8. Sound enthusiastic, but
don’t
go overboard.
Readers are pretty savvy these days. They’re also pretty
skeptical. If your copy is filled with obvious exaggerations,
you’ll lose their trust. For the same reason, don’t
fill your copy with exclamation points, bolding, underlining
and too many font styles and colors. Use these eye-catching
techniques with discretion. A hyped-up home page will decrease
believability. Instead, mix an equal portion of enthusiasm
with believability, and you’ll see results.
9. Proofread your copy.
It’s easy to find errors in grammar, spelling and punctuation
on the Internet. We’ve all seen them. But that doesn’t
make them right. Nothing detracts more from your professionalism
than misspelled words or sentences that don’t make sense.
Proofread your work, and ask others to do it too. An extra
set of eyes may catch mistakes you miss.
10. Make sure your design is professional.
First impressions count, even on the Internet. Be sure that
your online image, particularly your home page, conveys professionalism
or you’ll lose the visitor’s trust. Your site
doesn’t need to have glitzy graphics and expensive
flash screens, but it also shouldn’t look like it was
designed by your 13-year-old nephew.
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Susan Greene is a freelance copywriter located
in the Orlando, Central Florida area. If you would like
assistance with your writing project or permission to reprint
this article, please contact Susan at susan@susangreenecopywriter.com or
call (407) 578-5528.
Copyright © Susan
Greene
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